Awesome.
I can see what you mean by something is missing, but I'm slightly torn. I agree with what you say, and you could add something to the background, but at the same time, I like the simplistic background, and adding something would ruin that.
The only reason you lose marks is for the hair. I don't like the way it completely covers the face and it goes in a different direction to what you would think. I think that if you were to fix that it may add that little something you're looking for.
Yeah, the hair has been irking me ever since I drew it, but I don't know how to fix it without completely redrawing the head and the hair.
Alright but can improve.
Firstly, I like the air of mystery to this drawing. It adds significantly to the girl standing there.
The main problems I would see would be to make the shading more prominent, and to adds something behind the curtains. Nothing big, but maybe an odd room fading to black, which would increase the feeling of mystery even more.
thanks for the compliment and tips!
Well drawn with few problems.
The only problem that I could notice is the way the neck and mouth piece look like they're dead side on, while the bell of the saxophone looks like it's at an angle. Fix that and it will be awesome.
Thanks, I see what your aiming at, dont think I will fix it in this one though..
Wouldnt really know how to fix that with the shading and angle and such really...
anyways, Thanks a heap for the review!
Good but could be improved
I think the background is too 'nice'. The character looks very evil, so the bright sunset and the white clouds don't fit in very well. Why not put massive waves in the ocean, or thunder clouds in the sky?
The scenery was a first timer for me. I've never attempted this before. I still have to practice if I want to take it a step further and rough up the weather, but that still sounds like an awesome idea, though. I'll keep that in mind.
On the contrary, this character is quite good in nature... at least in that form. X)
An interesting style.
Firstly, I like the colouring and the cartoony style.
The main suggestion I would have is to tidy up a few of the lines, like the lines above the head.
Ok, thanks for the review! Now I just need to look up what "tidy" means in my language. :D
That is the sexiest rhino I have ever seen
Except for me, of course.
It's pretty awesome, I love the combination of the low-quality smiley and the high-quality rhino.
I can only imagine what amazing thing you could draw if you had a tablet :3
Yeah, this bitch doesn't even compare to you.
Lol yeah, I was too lazy to draw a blushy face, so blown up NG emoticons to the rescue.
I'm saving up for one, thanks :3
I also agree with lagamuffin.
Firstly, the colouring isn't great. You colour outside the line in some parts and it's full of gaps everywhere. The aura (or whatever it is) is poorly drawn with the spikes going out in different directions and are all completely different sizes. There's no shading which makes the drawing look very flat.
Finally, it's hardly the hardest thing to draw. It's a circle with a background. Why not do the pokéball after it's just been thrown with the trainer doing a throwing motion in the background? Or draw the pokéball opening up with a pokémon coming out to battle another one?
fuck you!
Nice.
I think this is great. It could just use some sort of background and colour, but what you have drawn is quite nice.
Why thank you!
I like it.
It has it's odd parts and flaws, but I like it. It has a nice 'modern' feel to it with the multicoloured eye replacing the head. The best advice I could give is to try and tidy things up a bit and make it bigger.
Yeah, The original pic was a bit larger, but its flaws were much more noticeable. Thanks for the review. ^_^
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